Monday, September 9, 2013

A Crush Chp. 27 *FINAL*

So this is the last chapter from " A Crush " Story ..

I know there are MANY chapters that were boring and no actions in them !

 But I Hope you liked it and I'm really sorry if i wrote or did or said anything wrong

Thank You to all who commented and sent me their feedbacks !

You are the BEST Readers EVER !!!!! LOVE YOU ALL !!!

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Hind's POV:
We had a family gathering at My parent's House ! We were all there : My Parent Aziz's Parent , Jassem & Sara , Aziz's little siblings !

After Lunch I received a weird message from an unknown number !

"Be ready for what's coming" 

Ha ? What do they mean ? I ignored it and continues talking with the rest of the family !

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Let me tell you Aziz's Family's reaction when They found out that Aziz is dead :

Aziz's Mom : Once she found out she fainted ! They took her to the hospital and she kept crying and shouting with Aziz's name ! She kept repeating his name everyday ! she always say ..

"Allah yr7mk ya 3ziz law kent mawjood ....."

"Laish r7t Ya 3ziz laish ?"

and stuff like that

Aziz's Sister "Sara" : she couldn't believe it ! She lost her father and now she lost her brother ! She thought that it was a prank from Aziz but it wasn't ans that made her cry !

Aziz's little siblings : They didn't told them ! They said that Aziz traveled and he'll be back soon !

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Jassem & Sara will be traveling to Turkey soon and they told me to come with them 3shan a3'yr jaw ! But My parent said no cause im pregnant and it's not good for the baby !

At Night I barely slept ! I can't move because of the thing inside me !

When i woke up Dana called me and told me that the girls will gather at her house , so i changed my cloth and went !

Yasmeen : Waaay Hanoud b6nch kbr wnasaa !!

Hind : *Laughed* Shftay shloun

Naida : 9j ma gltelna bent wla Wld ?

Hind : Entow shno ttw83on ?

They all said a girl but ..

Hind : Klkkm 3'l6 !

Dana : Y3ni wld !?

Hind : Etha mo bent 3ayal shno ?

They all laughed

Rana : Enzain 3ziz shno kan ybe bent wla wld !

I didn't reply on this one ! Aziz wanted a boy 3shan yl3b m3ah kura o ywde duwaniyat o ykon kela m3a ! Allah yr7mk ya 3ziz !

The girls noticed eni t6'aygt mn 6ary 3ziz !

Yasmeen changed the subject and we kept talking then we watched a movie like our old times !

After that i went back to my house and slept !

The days have passed and suddenly everybody changed ! Aziz's Mom , my mom , my dad , Jassem , Sara Even Faisal !

It was really weird cause once they see me they smile ! And they never talk about Aziz like they used to in the last months ! I ft that there is something wrong with them but all of them mra w7da ?

I tried my best to ignore the weirdness but i couldn't ! One day we were all sitting in the living room

Hind : Ohhhh Shfeeekm ? Walla t5r3on kel ma tshofon ttbosmon Sh9ayer ??

Suddenly they all laughed ! Why are they laughing ? I didn't say something funny ! I opened the TV And ignored them !

The next morning i went downstairs to eat breakfast but i didn't find anyone !

Hind : Rosee Where is mama and baba ?

Rose : They are all out ! Want breakfast ma'am ?

Hind : Yeah ! Make me some pancakes and egg ! Don't forget the Nutella !

Rose : Okay

I opened twitter in my phone and started reading people's stupid tweets ! This social media is getting boring ! After few minutes Rose came with the food ! And while eating someone knocked the door !

Hind : Rose open the door !

Rose : Okaay !

She opened the door and ....

........ : Alslam 3laikm !

I was giving the door my back so i didn't see who is it ! but The voice was familiar !

Hind : Rose Who is it ??

She didn't answer me !

Hind : Rose mno 3nd albab ??

She didn't answer this one either !

I was turning around and ....

Hind : Rose who ......

I Couldn't believe my eyes ! I just stood in my place didn't move and didn't say anything ! Am i dreaming ? I closed my eyes tightly and opened them ! No it's not a dream this is real ! I slowly went toward him ! He put his bags on the floor and hugged me !!

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The one that Hind couldn't believe her eyes when she saw him !
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Hind : 3ZIZ !!!!! *While hugging him and crying*

I was speechless ! But How ? Isn't he .... ?

He kept hugging me and didn't let me go !

Aziz : Eshtgtlch Hind ! *A tear fell slowly from his eye*

Hind : Ana b3d *sniff* Laish swait *sniff* chthy !

Aziz : Asef !

I don't want him to leave me ! I want to know how did this happen ? He told me that he's gone and now he's here ! Not that im not happy A9ln Im the happiest person on earth right now !

Aziz's POV :
Yes im not dead ! And no im not a ghost or a zombie ! I'm Just a person that had luck ! Well let me tell you what happened !

First , I've been visiting a doctor since before i marry Hind ! I have well had this disease that have only one cure and that cure is a surgery ! But .. Every person that do this surgery dies only one person didn't ! So i knew that this surgery will kill me ! And i didn't want my family to know about my death from the doctor but i didn't want to tell them in the face !

So before one week from the surgery i wrote a letter to Faisal and Hind which i know made them mad at me! Anyways No one Expected that i will live ! So the surgery finished and i came out but then said i need to "At3alch" Out side the country ! I don't know why i didn't tell Hind anything but that's what happened !

Before few days i surprised my family ! My mom cried and All of them did too ! but i told them not to tell Hind i wanted to surprise her !

I told Hind this while we were sitting in the living room alone !

Hind : Enzain wain kent 8 ashher ?

Aziz : Allah yslmch kent ib almania gam at3alch o al7mdella 5l9t 3ilaj

Hind : Aham shy enk rdaitle salem o mafeek shy bs law gayle ya 3ziz

Aziz : Walla 5ft y9eer shy mo zain f glt a6'l saket a7sn

Hind : 5ft y9eer shy ? Ent tdre sh9ar feni ? 6'lait akthr mn shahar ma agdr anam kela at5ylk jdame ! Gam athkr kel kelma o kel 7rf kent tgole eyaa ! O bchait le7ad 3yoone 9art mtfou5a o 7mra o ent 8 Ashaher ma s2lt 3ne wla klmtne !!

Her words made me feel bad ! I didn't think that this will happen to her !

Aziz : Hind walla asef o ana mt7sf kthr sh3r rase ! O Afef asef asef asef malion marra allah y5aleech sam7eni !

Hind came closer and hugged me !

Hind : I missed you 3ziz !

Aziz : Walla mo kthree !


After 1 Month ...


We were having our family gathering as always when suddenly !

Hind : B6NNEEE !!!

Aziz : SHFEECH ???

Hind : Wdneee almustshfa a7s eni bolad !

Hind screaming wanting me to take her to the hospital because she's about to have a baby freaked me out !!

Jassem : 3ZIIIZ GOOOM !!!

Me and Jassem helped Hind to get into the car ! After a long drive we finally arrived to the hospital ! The nurses took her inside a room and ... i really don't know what happened there !

Hind's POV :
I was thinking of surprising Aziz and telling him that it's a boy when i suddenly felt something is going to be out of me !!

Jassem & Aziz took me to the hospital as fast as they can and the nurses took inside a room !

Hind : Abee Omee Abee omee !!!

A nurse went out and called my mother and she came !

Mala da3ee agol shno 9ar dakhel 97 ?

The Doctor : Mbrook 7bebti !

He was so tiny and He looked so cute ! My eyes teared when i carried him !

They took the baby and took me to another room ! After few minutes Aziz came into the room with my family !

He quickly came to me and hugged me while im  in bed !

Aziz : Al7mdella 3la alslama 7bebte ! 3sa ma t3btay ? T3wrty ?

Hind : *Laughed* Allah yslmch la mako 3war wla shy !

Aziz still doesn't know if it's a girl or a boy ! The nurse came in with the baby with her ! I can see that Aziz was really happy and surprised when he saw him ! He rushed to the nurse and slowly carried the baby !

My Father took the baby and started reading Quraan in his ears !

After they all carried and had fun with the baby they finally gave him to me !

He's an angle ! His eyes were closed ! His nose and mouth are really small !

Aziz came and sat right next to me on the bed !

Aziz : Shno tbeen tsmena ?

Hind : Ent shno tbe ?

Aziz : Yousef ! 3la esm oboy allah yr7ma !

Hind : Yoused 3bdal3ziz AlXx ! The name is perfect !

Aziz : Just like you !

Aziz Kissed my head and ...

Aziz : A7bch Om Yousef !

Hind : O ana Akthr !

And That was my story !

After that we lived a life that i always dreamed of ! I've got the family i want , The Man of my dreams and The most adorable kid ever !


- THE END -


Let's see what happened to the other characters

Jassem and Hind wanted to have a baby but Allah ma ktblhm ! They are the first couple that i know that loves each other that much ! Im so happy for them !

Faisal Got married to a girl no one expected , Mariam ! Remember her ? Aziz's Cousin ! They were both evil with crazy mind so they made it out with an amazing relationship !

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So this is the Last chapter from my Second story !

Hope you liked it !

3ad tdron kel afkare kant ena 3ziz ymout bs klkm kentow tbona y3eesh so That's what happened ;p

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Thank You all For .. Well For EVERYTHING !!

Bye Bye

10 comments:

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